2021年澳洲硕士留学essay书写技巧

现在，越来越多的人申请去澳大利亚学习，文献资料对申请机构非常重要。那么如何写留学呢essay怎么办？然后我把它们带来了2021澳大利亚硕士学位essay写作技巧。

写作技巧。

一、从简单：复句中从句的简化

从简单是论指称复句从句的简化（clause reduction）。复句中有一些重复、空元素。把他们赶走，节省空间，简化句子是复句中从句的简化。我知道谈论语法很无聊，但是是，这种语法现象在真实的英语写作中很常见。我认为这是一个很好的工具是英语写作的特点之一。下列的是《时代杂志》摘自封面文章。作者Michael Schuman是一个人“旧笔杆”，他的写作风格更注重表达。

二、标点符号：灵活使用分号，结肠，破折号和连字符

标点是指是灵活使用分号（semi-colon），结肠（colon），破折号（em-dash）和连字符（hyphen）。几乎都是逗号和句点是一种“中国风味”。我觉得是是因为我们的过错专业英语教育我不太注意英语中这四个标点的用法，比如，这些知识点很少在高考中考查。相反的，以英语为母语的人在文章中会更频繁地使用这四个标点符号。

a.分号：隐形胶

Richard C. Wydick在他的法律英语经典著作中Plain English for Lawyers分号在中提到，他描述道：“一些律师对分号也有类似的态度是野蘑菇：有些很好吃，但是是有些是是致命的；因为没办法分辨区别，那就避开他们。”Wydick我自己的观点是分号没那么危险，而且非常有用。首先，分号可以用来连接两个密切相关的子句，这种方法的最大好处是是它可以增加写作的多样性，避免使用过多and这样的连词所不连续感（choppy sentences），同时，词语的使用也得到了简化。就这样是我为什么给分号起绰号隐形胶。

b.结肠：睁大耳朵听

冒号表示后面跟一个引用是上述内容一览表、总结或阐述。每次你用结肠，就像提醒读者：我要开始解释了。如果冒号用作枚举，则可以省略include/including，在视觉上创造一个更吸引眼球的标志。结肠是一个更有价值的用途是指导上一篇文章的总结（summary）、精心制作的（elaboration）也许是示例（illustration）。下面的示例也来自“Plain English for Lawyers”：

c. 破折号：无声强调

三、副词巧：用状态副词代替副词短语

“副词巧”指是多用状态副词代替状态副词短语。换句话说是把短语的意思浓缩成副词。

试着比较一下陈先生提供的几个句子组：

活泼可爱。值得进一步学习。下列的是有些状态副词在写作中很容易忘记。

四、单一工具，只有一个问题可以解决

就像在一个只有锤子的人眼里，所所有的问题是指甲。如果你的英语写作能力有限，这种表达常常是重复和单调的，我觉得是是“中国风味”英语枯燥的一个重要原因。上面的三宝，从简单、标点符号、副词巧，希望能给你的写作工具箱增加一些工具，仔细地雕刻你的作品、简洁的。但另一方面，这三宝是写作工具，而不是是写作原则，这也是事实是为什么我们看到作者根据情况做出不同的选择。我希望我们能像跑车一样驾驶英语，易于收回和释放，如风而过，享受Sheer Writing Pleasure。

写作错误。

1.不能使用第一人称。例如I、me、mine、my这些话，只有在文本中，只是是扣分。如果是对于一个大团体，它是可以使用的we/our，例如：our humans 我们人类。但如果只是是你和你的朋友，我们，那不行。

2.不能有个人语言，例如 stuff 事情，感觉太私人化了。

3.使用肯定语句，别含糊其辞。例子：she is like friendly towards him. 她似乎对他很友好。 有“像”那不是真的。

4.每一段都应该有一个完整的结构，包括开场白topic sentence（一个话题），然后是支持句 support sentence， ?联想句 linking sentence，总体结果 conclusion

5.每个段落都应该有一个与主题相对应的主题，不要偏离主题 。

6.不允许使用缩写，例如，它只能写can not，不会写字can’t。

书写格式。

essay 从 introduction， body， conclusion， reference它由四个部分组成，全文统一使用times new roman字体，小四，1.5双线间距 。

essay是理论性强的论文，正常情况下，确保使用3人，不是第一个，两人角色，注意语言，多用副词。为了避免使用 第一人称，有些地方可以用被动语态或其他句型来代替。

参考模型。

Introduction

Nowadays a great majority of teachers argue that students are more and more diverse and it is quite hard for them to know clearly about all the details of each and every one of their students. Fortunately, students’ sharing their own personal story with the teacher can, to a great extent, help the teacher better understand the students so that the teacher can give what students want and provide necessary suggestions for them in time. In this way, there is no doubt that students can in the meantime have a pleasant study journey under the proper guidance of the teacher, resulting in students’ better performance both for life and for study. Personally speaking, I am quite willing to share with you my personal story, hoping that you can know more about me and if possible I can make friends with you when the class is over. Therefore this memorandum explains some of my basic information, the most typical and crucial of which lies in my academic and professional aspirations as will be elaborated in the following.

Body

I am one that hails from China and the reason why I go abroad for further study is that I really long for an overseas education experience. I always hold that an overseas education experience can shape me into a better one through steeling myself to be able to deal with all kinds of difficulties either small or large. I have to admit that the moment when I put forward the idea of applying for abroad study, my family members all disagree with it in that they are afraid that I can not well take care of myself when I am alone abroad. However my persistence has enabled them to see my desire and they are on my side in the end. Many people may wonder why I firmly insist on studying abroad without taking any regard of my parents’ disapproval and what I really expect in college. To be honest, what I expect the most is not something seemingly great but just to broaden my own horizon and strengthen my accounting knowledge by taking advantage of rich resources in the foreign libraries. Moreover, I would like to make as many friends as possible with people from other countries all over the world so that I am able to experience the cultural difference and can keep in touch with those international friends even after graduation. Also, I believe that more chances to practice my English will make it improve step by step and I can speak English fluently some day.

Speaking of my academic disappointments, what is a pity to say is that I have actually done poorly in some of the quizzes either due to my being careless while taking them or my not preparing well enough for them before. Certainly, there are times when there are really difficult problems for me and they are in fact out of my ability, leading to my being unable to solve them. When those occasions turn up, I will become somewhat frustrated in the first beginning while I will quickly adjust myself to figure out ways to help myself out as soon as possible. Thus, I can smoothly tackle those difficult problems in the end. And it is right at the minute when I successfully deal with those difficult problems that I can feel the happiness and relief from within. Or maybe it can be put in another way that the smooth handling of those difficult problems can be regarded as part of my academic achievements. As for other sources of my academic achievements, what I would like to mention is that I have sometimes obtained quite satisfactory outcome in the exams and I am really proud that my efforts can pay off in the due time. By the way, my motto is just “No pains, no gains”, which fits really perfectly in this situation. And when I patiently explain the hard points to other classmates who can not get across to them, I can as well have a sense of making achievements. Furthermore, whenever I find out the way to solve a certain problem or an easier way for that same problem, I can in the meantime taste the sweetness of success.

The rationale why I select accounting as my major is that I am born with rather strong mathematical analysis ability, logical thinking ability together with a profound understanding capacity and I always show fervent interest in numerical issues. Besides, accounting is one of the promising professions in China and it seems to be given increasing attention and emphasis by most people. It is said that China is in great urgency of accounting personnel so that I may be given a greater possibility to have my secured post-graduation employment if I step into the accounting field. The most significant one is that I am sensitive to numbers and I am sure that I am competent enough to become a qualified accountant in the future. When it comes to my professional goal, I have made up my determination that I will spare no efforts to become an accountant as my future career, from a junior one and gradually become a senior one through the constant accumulation of experience and the increase of my knowledge about how to become a better accountant. So for the present period, I have to equip myself with necessary knowledge and skills in order that I can deal with the practical conditions with facility in real scenes.

In order to put the theory into the practice, I have applied to become an intern in Bank of China in the summer vocation and now I have completed that internship. Detailed speaking, I am responsible for dealing with all kinds of documents for Document Center of BC International Settlement and I have to guarantee the accuracy and completeness of all the documents. So when I am with a document, I will tackle it over and over again so that it can be with no errors. And those documents are with a high frequency of numbers, I have actually made my potential to the full play when working as an intern there. Though this internship lasts just for a short vocation, I have really benefited a lot from within and I have realized many defects of my own. I understand that if I would like to be an accountant in the near future, I have to try my best to correct those bad habits and not to commit the same mistake any more. Talking about myself in five years, I feel like that I have already become an advanced accountant and I can easily deal with any account-related issues. Apart from that, I can in the meanwhile turn to some financial methods for better financing of my own funds by using my major advantages.

Conclusion

That’s part of my personal story and I bet that you can know me quite well if you have read all about them. If you would like to know more me, I am pretty eager to share with you other matters about myself. Thanks for your time.