2021年澳洲本科留学动机信写作技巧分享

申请去澳大利亚留学不是是太简单了，需要准备出国留学动机书。励志信的前几行应该用来解释你信的目的，现在让我们和小编一起来看看2021澳大利亚本科留学意向书的写作技巧，我希望你有所帮助。

写作内容一览表：

1.申请人原产国条件；

2.申请人在澳大利亚的未来条件；

3.申请人的移民历史；

4.课程对申请人未来的价值；

5.其他可能导致短期留在澳大利亚的因素。

如何写出合理的留学动机

1.激励信应该很简单、整洁的，让对方乐于阅读

所写出简单明了的句子，按内容分段，不需要太罗嗦。在本文中，写下你在哪里长大就足够了，多写点吧是颤抖。你需要把每一句话都记下来是服务全体，如果没有是这是必要的，这意味着句子可以继续优化。你可以让别人读很多遍所已完成的文件，一步一步，消除不恰当的表达。

2.避免孩子气，委婉语

外国学生在他们的文件中经常犯一些幼稚的错误，写文件时要注意不要幼稚，避免太直接，当然，它不应该被使用。

3.时间不应该太长，最好言简意赅

虽然一个乐器需要包含很多内容，但长度仍需注意，不会太久，不要谈论你有多好，你的优势是什么，这些在这里是需要学校来评判，不要夸大自己的条件。

Dear Sir or_ Madam,

I appreciate that you can take time off your busy schedule to read my letter. This is a letter of my motivation to apply for the Master degree of Precision Manufacturing (MPM) at The University of Applied Sciences and Arts of Southern Switzerland (SUPSI).

First, allow me to introduce myself. My name is XXX. I’m a first grade postgraduate of Guangdong University of Technology (GDUT). My major is Mechanical Engineering and Automation. I get my bachelor degree in Mechanical Engineering and Automation at Wuhan University of Technology on 7th July 2011. After I graduated from my university, I worked in Jiangling Automobile Joint-stock Company for about 1 year. Then I took the Postgraduate Entrance Examination and was enrolled at GDUT at last.

There are some hearty reasons why I like SUPSI and the major of MPM.

Firstly, I am interested in MPM, for I have been studying in Mechanical Engineering and Automation since I started my university life. It’s well known that this major plays a foundational role of the developing of industry and it is easy for us to find a job. MPM, in my opinion, is a similar major with Mechanical Engineering and Automation. Exactly speaking, it’s the specialization and concretion of Mechanical Engineering and Automation. MPM in SUPSI based on a set of prominent and well balanced lectures that not only promote individual professional skills and cultivate their ability but also their creativity, management level and shape attitude. I think I can get more professional knowledge than I can get in land and extend my knowledge fields to enhance my competitive strength.

Secondly, SUPSI can offer me good teaching quality. SUPSI is one of the eight universities of Applied Sciences in Switzerland. The university focuses on education based on professional need and on applied research, and at the same time, it provides a practice-oriented education and offers a wide range of master’s programs. The educational goad of MPM at SUPSI is to shape new professional figures characterized by research and operate skills through an effective training path constantly merging research and education. For my part, I prefer practice-oriented education to pure research-oriented.

Thirdly, SUPSI can afford me a good environment to study. According to Global Competitiveness Report 2009-2010, Switzerland ranked number one among a total of 131 surveyed countries. It’s a reflection of a world-class capacity for innovation, combined with a highly sophisticated business culture. The country has a well-developed infrastructure for scientific research, with close collaboration between the leading research centers and industries. What’s more, the top-notch infrastructure, well-built education and health care systems as well as clean and beautiful environment all provide a safe, convenient, comfortable and healthy living environment for me to live and study.

Additionally, SUPSI gives a preferential tuition fee. The institution cooperates with our university. Due to cooperation between the Chinese and Swiss governments on this project, the fees are low. I think choosing to study at SUPSI can lower the financial pressure to my family. Furthermore, after graduating from SUPSI, I will become more competitive and enjoy a more positive prospect in future job market.

Finally, thank you for your reading again. I am seriously interested in studying at your university.

Looking forward to hearing from you and with best regards to you.

Yours faithfully,

XXX